支招小作文(220) I 动态组合图某欧洲国家男女获得驾照比例对比

March 27, 2025

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The bar charts below show information about driving license in a particular European country.

主体段分段方法：

一图一段

开头段

The first bar chart illustrates changes in the proportions of males and females holding a driver’s license from 1976 to 2006, while the second chart compares the percentage of male and female drivers aged 17-20 over the period from 1996 to 2006.

概述段

Overall,althoughboth gendersexperienced a rising trendin the proportion of driving license holders, malesconsistently outnumberedtheir female counterpart throughout the given period.Additionally,there was a decrease inthe 17-to-20-year-old drivers.

思路要点：

- 1976-2006之间男女比例都上升，但都是男生比例>女生比例

- 年轻司机(17-20岁)的比例下降

Body paragraph 1

In terms of the comparison betweenmale and female drivers,it is clear thatthere was an upward trend forboth genders. The percentage of malesgrew steadily, risingfrom 70% to 80% between 1976 and 2006. The proportion of womenalsoincreased,butmore significantly,doublingfrom around 30% to 60% during the same period.

思路要点：图1

- 男女比例都上升

- males：1976年的70%→小幅度上升，到2006年达到80%

- females：也上升，但变化显著，从30%上涨两倍，达到60%

Body paragraph 2

However, the proportion of young drivers (aged from 17 to 20)declinedover the period.This decrease was particularly notable forfemales,with the figure dropping significantlyfrom 30% in 1996 to 20% in 2006.Similarly,these years witnessed a slight fall inthe percentage of male drivers,reaching45% in 2006.

思路要点2：图2

- 17-20岁的年轻驾驶员数量呈现下降趋势

- females：从1996年的30%显著下降到2006年的20%

- males：小幅度下降，2006年达到45%