以前山是山，海是海，而如今山川江海都是你。

古典诗改《鹧鸪天·山水契》

‌(依《词林正韵》第三部平声韵)‌

曾见青峰云自移，沧浪拍岸各相宜。
而今行过三千界，俱化烟岚入鬓眉。

风写韵，月裁诗，星河漫卷作君衣。
何须更问蓬山远？万象森罗一念痴。

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1. 时空维度重塑
   • 原句的"以前/如今"转化为上阕实景与下阕虚境的对照：
     • 上阕"青峰云移""沧浪拍岸"呈现独立存在的山水本相
     • 下阕"烟岚入鬓""星河作衣"实现物我交融的超越
2. 意象系统升级
   • 将直白的"你"升华为多重隐喻：
     • "烟岚入鬓眉"暗喻思念浸透容颜
     • "星河作君衣"象征爱意涵盖寰宇
   • 融入道家"万象森罗"概念，拓展情感哲学纵深
3. 词律意境契合
   • 选用《鹧鸪天》词牌：
     • 前段四句三平韵对应山水独立的疏朗格局
     • 后段五句三平韵适配情思缱绻的缠绵质地
   • 核心动词"化/卷/问"构成能量流动轨迹，呼应原句的转变逻辑