支招小作文(211) I 动态线图不同年龄段参观博物馆

January 6, 2025

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The graph below shows the percentage of people visiting museum once a month or more between 1980 and 2010.

分段方法：

Body 1：18-25(蓝色)、26-45(橙色)

Body 2：46-65(黄色)、65+(绿色)

开头段

The line graph illustrates changes in the proportion of people from five age groups who went to museums at least once a month between1980 and 2010.

概述段

Overall, all age groups saw an increase in museum visits over the period,except forthose aged 46-65.The most significant growth was observed amongthe youngest age group

思路要点：

- 除了46-65之外，其他年龄段的人数比例都呈现上升趋势

- 18-25岁人数比例涨幅最大

Body paragraph 1

Initially, 30% of people inthe age bracket of 26-to-45visited museums, the highest proportion among all groups. This figurerose steadily to40% by 1988,before falling slightly by5% over the next eight years.However,the final 14 years saw a sharp increase to55%.Similarly,the percentage ofyoung people(18-25)soaredfrom only 15% in 1980 to almost 70% in 2010,overtakingthe figure forthose aged 26-45in 1996.

思路要点：18-25(蓝色)、26-45(橙色)

- 橙色：1980年四个年龄组里最高(30%)→随后显著上升到1988年的40%→1996年小幅度下降了5%→2010年显著上升到55%

- 蓝色：1980的15%急剧上升到2010的70%。其中在1996年超过橙色

Body paragraph 2

In contrast, the proportion ofmuseum visitors over 46 years oldremained relatively low throughout the period.Specifically,a marginal risefrom 25% in 1980to a peak of30% in 1988could be foundinthe 46-65-year-olds,after which there was a remarkable drop by15% in the final year.Likewise, the figure forthe oldest age grouptripledto 30% in the beginning 16 years,followed by a modest drop to10% in 2004.Afterwards, this figuresurpassedthe percentage ofpeople aged 46 to 65anddoubledin 2010.